Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Paragraph

In the court, it becomes clear how racist people can be. Mr. Gilmer says rude remarks and racist comments as he is questioning Tom Robinson. He doesn't treat Tom with the proper respect because he keeps calling him "boy." This shows how Mr. Gilmer is racist because when he questioned Mr. Tate, he didn't treat him the same way. The court was biased to the white side and it definitely showed by the way everyone treated Tom. (with the exception of Atticus. :)

6 comments:

andrew rocks said...

it was pretty good. nice smiley face at the end LOL

christian said...

perfect i cant find any mistakes high five

~*KATIE*~ said...

Nice paragraph, i noticed I couldn'tfind any spelling errors. I do think the corut was for the whites and it wouldn't matter wat the case was they would of choose the whites over the blacks any day.

CiaRa said...

Very nice paragraph. You are organized very well, and you seemed to follow the prompt correctly. I also didn't notice any mistakes. Great job!

Amy said...

Great job Smiley (: I liked the thesis you picked and it was very clear to understand.

~~maddie~~ said...

i agree with all of them :) i really like your idea, and your thoughts were very orgaized!!